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Postby Mc Cubz » Oct 8th, '07, 23:46

am a drum n base mc, but everything i speak makes sense
a dus love da base n beat, an dis is how I speak jake endz
manny, gun-ches, many man-ches, manny man am english,
you say it but ya sound da same, a man ya can distinguish,

none ya can extinguish, ever, cubz, a take my time to speak,
none ya can jus finish, ever, blood, ya make a rhyme n sweet,
one day ya hype, will be over, just like a fight, wen its over,
until den guys, kill it colder, I just flip it, motorolla,

take my time to speak, da beats beating for my heart,
and so at night dont sleep, but feel ease in da dark,
wen-a-run-a-rhmye, am deep, deep, as your ever guna find,
a feel these, my, beats deep, pannin heavin in my mind,

da bigger, da bigger, da bigger da rave, da bigger, da bigger, da bigger da rave,
shake jake amazing raves, da bigger, da bigger da name,
but I just wan-da peace n love, n show da way dats right,
and dat is why I leave my love, on hip hop faith inside,
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Re: verse

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 9th, '07, 23:29

lyrics were good, nice rhymes and some sick lines, but i couldnt grasp the flow, ive listened to drum n base witch is why i probly cant grasp the flow, i dont know its your goin really fast or if its choppy to the beat :sweating: if you audio it make sure to post :y:
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