some keystyle i did tonight, check it out

[stevethetruth]

i'm away, okay/
with the a-k i spray/
i could do this shit all day/
let your brain hang out and disconnect away/
i play the rough way/
you ain't as tough per say/
neeglect my rhymes and believe you'll pay/
in the worst most horrible/
rip you into pecies down to the last particle/
this here is art in motion/
this is how my thoughts are broken/
not with dope i'm smoking/
or the dick you choking/
on, and believe i'll continue/
to the next venue/
flip up every line you got in your menu/
done like that who's the next cat/
i gotta battle clap/
with lines i spew you all react/
like you all just knew i was the king of rap/
but it's w ay beyond that/
embrace the flow i fire/
leaving me with more to desire/
you could try to speak but your mouth's just wired/
so please keep it shut/
to me even if it kneads your gut/
watch me spit before you heed to strut/
please don't bluff cause you will leave corrupt/
before i even finish my verse and bars you will leave this dump/
i'm done spiting flows off my dome/ so before i go/
there's a little thing you must know/
i will defeat anyone who dares to steal my show

[Steve Spag]

Hey man, havn't heard from you in a while, but good read. Had some really sick lines in there. Keep it up.

[lostdaze18]

maybe if u left my house once in a while and stayed home u would be writing more lol

[stevethetruth]

Hey man, havn't heard from you in a while, but good read. Had some really sick lines in there. Keep it up.

thanks a lot man, means alot

maybe if u left my house once in a while and stayed home u would be writing more lol

haha so true

Not bad at all. Some really nice parts, I didnt like the opening lines. Its sick, Especially for a keystyle.

thanks alot man, means a lot coming from you, and yeah the opening was somewhat a warm up lol