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Bitch Slapping Wack

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 1st, '07, 03:27

as I Start It Out standing in my Guarded House Looking for Parted Clouds
they looking retarded now my bar is down shining on tha Darkest Grounds

like living in this Semi Hell but Then I Dwell on creating A Tension
in tha End Lies Tell this Extends My Health thus not creating Attention

are Ya Sensing Tha Pent In Dimensions that Encompass Me In Comes Mystique
an Enigmatic Heated Status so rains a Repeated Magic cuz my Income Is Weak

I Still Try u won't see my Will Die tha clinton air force one I let tha Bills Fly
straight Buying Bud Hiding Cuz of what yur Implying Judge I smoke Till High

Funnel Funds just to Pummel Lungs I want to See Cash and that makes Me Last
tha Capitols Money but u can't live good cuz it's tha Capitols Money so I Relapse
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Re: Bitch Slapping Wack

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 1st, '07, 18:11

another sick drop!
it was awesome man,
but sumtimes there are so many multi's that its kinda hard to keep track of the lines meaning
but all in all , it was wiked :y:
P.S-could u please review ma post as well??
thnx
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Bitch Slapping Wack

Postby SajN » Nov 1st, '07, 19:30

Good drop man! :y:
I always like ur style

but as Arabian Shady said: sumtimes there are so many multi's that its kinda hard to keep track of the lines meaning.
Sometimes I get dizzy :p :whistle:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: Bitch Slapping Wack

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 2nd, '07, 15:53

:happy: :p :y:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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