No Where to Run (rap i wrote.. leave feedback!)

[soperman005]

No Where to Run

Yo sometimes life is oh so hard
Sometimes itll leave ya' oh so scarred
I wanna open my car get in and go far-
Away but im stuck, like im a bug in a jar
I wanna be the best but im so depressed
Im one big mess and it leaves me pess-
imistic wit a limp dick, im a sick kid
Ive tried to fix it, so many drugs, my brain i miss it
I love my parents but i dont show that i care- n'
Im a big kid but this shirt dont fit when a wear it
People i used to think were pathetic as fuck
Compared to me, look like they gettin it done
Yall better than me ya i said it you won
Every look my parents give me say you dead to me son
Especially one, my mother, she correct from day one
And my sis, i never really guess shed end up
Wit dudes that steal from me like they better than us
Im 'posed to support her once heaven become-
My mom and daddys home but ive already screwed up
So i stare at my wrists wit a machette to cut
Theres no where to run and im scared im done
Im fallin down an abyss, cuz i didnt care enough

[shady4life!]

that was okay seems a lil similar to somethin i might right/written b4 nice drop

[Arabian Shady]

i liked it , the fact was that i had listen 2 a song whose beat was stil in ma head so all ur rhymes just sorta fell in plave to da tune!
keep postin!