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The maximum Mask

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The maximum Mask

Postby maximum69 » Nov 4th, '07, 03:56

no chorus for this yet let me know what you think

Yo this is it no more holding back
After all this my soul is cracked in half
Cold as ice and feeling so sad
But enough is enough it ends now
The way I am just depends how
Many times Shelby murders me
She sits there with daggers hurting me
And is purposely is erking me
And pushing my buttons all day long
But I dumped her faster then you can say gone
And as I get bored the beat plays on
And so I put the face on
The maximum mask and blaze on
And tear it up like sunrays I’m
The greatest you will ever hear
Someone you better fear

Yo I loved you so much
And you were like so what
And if it weren’t for that I would not have blown up
I have tried everything I could think of
And would do anything to make this world ing suck
And hate the fact these bells are being struck
That all sound the alarm
I am armed and dangerous and harmed
Mentally endangered and not in the mood
Me and Shelby just got in a feud
Cause now she likes some other dude
So know I vent and I spew
And I do what I do
To make it through what I been through
And direct my anger at them and you
I am The greatest you will ever hear
Someone you better fear


There aren’t going to be any survivors
When I get it cracking packing these lighters
Kelsey I’m yours your personal writer
And I am yours dier I am your fighter
Tory you we know you like her
Ever since I got of diapers
I know I was going to rip this
And ever since that day my pace has quickened
And my mind has sickened
And ever since somebody listened
I been speaking a million words a minute
And till the day I am reminiscent
Just remember this is
The greatest you will ever hear
Someone you better fear

leave feedback !!!!
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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