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Remember Me

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Remember Me

Postby maximum69 » Nov 4th, '07, 03:53

Verse 1

I am just hating the fact, people keep saying I’m wack
All I am doing is spraying the facts and playing you cats
And simply praying that it all works in the end
I have no clue were I am going but I know were I have been
I keep having this dream it’s me sitting backstage
Everyone’s moving at a fast pace, like it’s a drag race
And then there telling me its time to perform
I throw on this suit it’s my uniform and try concentrate
Then I turn and say, you got the wrong kid it’s not my place
I’m not who you want not me I am to average no one special
They all say “talk about you girl left you”
But I am scared someone grabs me by my hair
And there I am center stage there’s something in the air
It all starts here and it could all stop here so though the ends not clear
I know this

Chorus
You are going to remember me and you’re never going to forget the heat
You are going to remember me as I spit over this beat
And you are going to remember me as the illest flowing Mc

Verse 2

So here I am millions screaming my name
I guess we live life day by day
I don’t care if you like me but if you do come a bit over to my way
You can go ahead and say I’m gay and that I don’t fly straight
Say that I can’t get over my girl and get out of my world
But as time swirls and I hurl from to many pills
It seems like I can’t get any kills besides my own will
You say you’re parents are whores at least you met yours
Let me take you back before like before I was born
And I was born in the middle of a city
Couldn’t tell you if my mom was pretty
See she dumped me right quickly and then later on it hit me
Why she had ten kids she was a prostitute
And so all I want to do is be something better then that that’s all dude
So I do this create music and I’m sick at it I’m ruthless
And this music is all I got so if I lose it
I am right back were I was when I was born, clueless
And nowhere to go there no one I do know
That could help me so I help my self and there one thing you should know

Chorus
You are going to remember me and you’re never going to forget the heat
You are going to remember me as I spit over this beat
And you are going to remember me as the illest flowing Mc
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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Re: Remember Me

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 4th, '07, 11:30

alot better lyrics on this one man, some pretty nice multis and the flow was there aswell

good job man an enjoyable read :y:
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