Good Day.

by **Steve Spag** » Nov 4th, '07, 17:25

Just wrote this now. It's to a beat, so again there's a certain flow that you might not get. I liked the way it turned out though, lol.

10:00 early day, I am already awake//
I had a bad fucking dream, and now I'm 'bout to blaze//
So this day's turning good, I wonder what'll happen next?//
Will I win the fucking lottery just playin' at Macs?//
Or will I get a new job, would I get a new car?//
Will a label call me up saying I'm their next star?//
Man, I don't know, this life is fucked//
It's a good day but tomorrow it'll suck//
But for now I'm having fun so I will ease my mind//
With my easy rhymes in these sleazy times//
Just believe my lines and never leave me dyin'//
Can't you see I'm blind, but still Steven's fine//
Yeah, 'cause that's just the way it goes in life//
My flow's are tight and you're bogus right?//
Ha, I got it all figured out you see//
I'm like the high school geek on these beats, you flee//

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by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Nov 4th, '07, 17:29

i liked the flow to it, dunno since i cant hear the beat obv, but it was sorta laid back feel ot it in my head :y:

rhymes were varied and a nice balance for a audio track, some people try force stuff far too much but you didnt in this you just let it go and sound natural, i liked that :y:

the concept was pretty nice aswell

But for now I'm having fun so I will ease my mind//
With my easy rhymes in these sleazy times//
Just believe my lines and never leave me dyin'//
Can't you see I'm blind, but still Steven's fine//
Yeah, 'cause that's just the way it goes in life//

fav. part