hardly any time for me to write here...

[Ka0t1c]

lost causes demolished at what cost, all I wanted was to not be forgot
and now i'm haunted by the thought im becomin tossed to just rot
so off of the top, to the bottom i drop from my loft
but a lots to be done before i am gone
is that too far beyond me or can i respond
to my fans im just sorry, i never meant to have this done to me outta anybody
but im happy someone in the forum's backing me up
cuz i cannot always put to track many jots im ready to log...

[Rain Matrix]

good drop tha flow took tha reader right through

know ya close to notable everytime I've seen u've wrote a flow

peace

[Xray]

nice this gone be audio?

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

there was nice potential in there with the rhymes, the flow was iffy, and structure wasnt to great

but kee it up