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Postby maximum69 » Nov 1st, '07, 23:23

Life is a complicated issue
Full of drama and tissues
Are honor is misused
Broken down and confused
Thrown around shot with pistols
And its crazy how pissed it gets you
Life is full of insanity man
Am I okay man I feel like a crazy man?
Everyone is either evil or shady man
Can anybody save me man?
I feel so alone in this world
It just kicks you and swirls
And makes you spin and twirl
And gives you girls
That only makes things worse
And all this stuff makes it hurt
When you see everyone leave
And I sit there and its just me
All by myself isolated
All there desolate feeling wasted
Man most be clearly pasted
And…
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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Postby city » Nov 11th, '07, 21:37

that was hott

props
Windows tintied on my ride when i drive in it
so when i rob a bank, run and just dive in it
so i'll be disquised in it
and if anybody identifies the guy get it
i'll hide for five minutes
come back, shoot the eye witness
fire at the private eye hired to pry in my bussines
Die b*tches, bastards, brats, pets
this puppy's lucky i aint blast his *ss yet

I'm a CRIMINAL

Best Eminem song ever!
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