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Postby Robbie G » Dec 5th, '07, 05:35

totally in focus now don't know how but I finally got my flow, just gatta read my shit a little slow, Nobody can compete against my punchlines, specially when im hiding two nines so read between the lines, im what you want to be knock down your self esteem to the lowest degree.

Im on top now, willing to battle anyone, spraying you with disses that hit harder than a tommy gun, I aint playin man this wont be fun when I unleash on you so shoo! go away if you cant take the heat I dont bother to be discrete I just come out and diss you, you make threats but everything you say is untrue, im real when I walk, real when I talk, real when i hold down my block.

I really dont like you, but ima help you out and give you a peer review, your so fucking bad you make me look good, so thank you, I didnt have much of a debut but I can come much harder, when I die they'll call me a martyr.

Thats it for now so chow chow, ahh screw it before I leave mine as well take a bow

:flutter:

(I know it's a little over the top but I was just havin fun with it)
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Re: Random Drop

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 6th, '07, 16:02

...magically appears

u should title this wishfull thinking

tha flow was here and there literally
but u had some good vocabulary

keep dropping and keep battling

...rain makes his 1000th post on trshady.com

...magically disappears
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Re: Random Drop

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 7th, '07, 13:31

lol, i liked the piece man!
follow rains advice , he just said wat i woudve!
wiked drop
peace
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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