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a little jingle i wrote quick last night at 3 am

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a little jingle i wrote quick last night at 3 am

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 14th, '07, 08:33

i might decay but my sight aint grey
so i write today to fight and say
what's on my mind
I pray to find my way in the life i play
cuz i strive to stay at the lines i lay

and theres no time to waste
before i erase, i wanna rise
but in case i die awake,
for a suprise i update by recording these rhymes i create

what's in store in my climb my eyes await
but am i blind to ignore the signs i am bait
from the Lord of the lying snake
cuz this court is the crime i'll face

and i shouldn't fall short, and start declinin my pace

ima go towards the source to enlighten my place
on this freightenin horror course that forms a vio-lent maze
ima explore ashore, not hide in my cave
ima resort to all sorts of sides and be brave
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: a little jingle i wrote quick last night at 3 am

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 14th, '07, 11:28

dude thats shit was dope man,
rhymes was awesome n the flow was great.
wiked drop!!!
peace

P.S:could u please review my drop as well
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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