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some new shit

Postby stevethetruth » Dec 17th, '07, 16:31

everytime i see you i never wanna leave your side
and i promise i'll love you till the day i die
no lies, you know what i hold for you is great
it's like fate never lost trace or got displaced
or disappeared in the mix so quick took a split
these pricks just envy of what i have they ticked
they can't admit i got the best their is it's odd
for once i hit the top and have yet not to stop
we combined so fine i want to never hit rewind
you are worth it in these eyes of mine is this a sign?
your perfect above and under the surface (you knew this)
there's no other way to word it but we both deserve it
the first time we kissed god i was so nervous
no doubts i want to shout without you i'd be so hurted
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Re: some new shit

Postby stevethetruth » Dec 18th, '07, 01:15

damn 59 views and no feed but hey who am i to complain i'm barely on myself haha
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Re: some new shit

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 18th, '07, 16:46

rhymes used were good

tha flow was on point

good drop keep dropping
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