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hit yall w/ a lil freestyle

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hit yall w/ a lil freestyle

Postby patwivo » Dec 27th, '07, 08:43

i was gone for a second, but who the fuck cares
about me or about these raps i share
i'll take the hair off of ya ass cheeks with nair
now it feels smoother in ya underwear
goofy as hell when it comes to my style
the scene of my penis makes a blind man smile
with my ridgedness your nails i file
im like gum on your shoe i'll stick around for a while
with my razor sharp pencil stick holes in your temple
rappin really sucks with no instrumental
i go accapellla, yeah im a fly fella
i'll put you below make you a cave dwella
im hella hella wicked ya asshole i stick it
with pipe bombs and liquid, it seeps out with quickness
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Re: hit yall w/ a lil freestyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 27th, '07, 21:39

this had flow it was cooky but not in a bad way

nice free keying piece

nice to see u back

peace
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Re: hit yall w/ a lil freestyle

Postby patwivo » Dec 27th, '07, 23:14

Rain Matrix wrote:this had flow it was cooky but not in a bad way

nice free keying piece

nice to see u back

peace


thanks dude
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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