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spittin

Postby city » Jan 5th, '08, 05:27

I dont think my sh*t goin anywhere yet
need to breath please god give me a rest
is this supposed to be for me?
or another wack emcee
tell me now so i dont waste my time
i'll just drop my pen a nd leave
cuz time waits for noone
24 hours and then theres a new sun
if there is a spot for me on the stage then it better dam come soon
cuz im sick of servin emcees in my 6 period lunch room
if you could even call them that
these cats know where im at
every second of my life theres another group or possy chasin me like little brats
the way i look at it is
that life is just full of sh-
people just need somethin to pull it out before they lose they grip
Windows tintied on my ride when i drive in it
so when i rob a bank, run and just dive in it
so i'll be disquised in it
and if anybody identifies the guy get it
i'll hide for five minutes
come back, shoot the eye witness
fire at the private eye hired to pry in my bussines
Die b*tches, bastards, brats, pets
this puppy's lucky i aint blast his *ss yet

I'm a CRIMINAL

Best Eminem song ever!
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Re: spittin

Postby Crazy Sycho » Jan 5th, '08, 06:16

not bad, but try more complicated rhymes, challenge yourself more :y:
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