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Society And Shadows

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 30th, '07, 21:58

without any wings I Fell knowing no one lives My Hell
I do this for me Why Else would I drop I don't Fly Well

why do u care that I get mySelf High don't Sell Buy
I might be a free man if I could tell this Cell Bye

this country can be crazy no doubt Yur Messed With
spreading democracy before it was ever Perfected

tha pop charts really don't want to wage Skills War
another fucking dollar bill thats what we Kill For

guess I'm tha voice of anyone who's ever Felt Scared
they don't give a fuck how we live look at Health Care

too many people keep solving their problems By Guns
no wonder tha best minds always seem to Die Young

America's expanding they just keep paving New Streets
tha old ones are still here and they wish they Knew Peace

news depictions acting like tha drama Ain't A Trigger
I have no answers for u all I can do is Paint Tha Picture
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 1st, '08, 09:48

:o
awsome man, that was wiked as hell.
probably the best peice i've read frm you!
my best line was
news depictions acting like tha drama Ain't A Trigger
I have no answers for u all I can do is Paint Tha Picture


thats shit was fabulous,
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby J Roc » Jan 2nd, '08, 04:58

Nice As Always Rain :y: Felt It Was Real Too :b:
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby -[Zach]- » Jan 2nd, '08, 08:04

:o daaaaaaaaaamn...thats all i can say...i love that right there...i feel the same way as those lines...making me wish i wrote that lol...anways that was incredible :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby Enimee » Jan 2nd, '08, 09:55

put it to song its lovely bro on some realness
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby Wallace » Jan 2nd, '08, 18:34

very nice, as another guy said the last line closed with a gold key :y:
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 3rd, '08, 15:45

thanks for the feedback guys

I appreciate each and every reply

... I really hope one day I can record and get my stuff heard

peace
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 4th, '08, 10:49

dont waste time man,
evn if u b come thick headed n try n sell this i'm bettin ppl will buy it
'kno wat i mean?
sick hell man
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby SajN » Jan 4th, '08, 11:06

Really great drop Rain :y:
I felt it, and you should record it.
Keep it up :y:
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Re: Society And Shadows

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 20th, '08, 13:52

this rhyme is tight, nowhere seemed flawed at allso big props on this drop


btw, im back now so expect a bombardment of my new stuff...

peace rain
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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