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black spot

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 20th, '08, 14:19

im glad im not in a black spot at the back of ya heads
instead im up front, so thats a fact im undead
am i gone from hip hop cuz ive already done left
man they cant stop me because of whatever i've said

ive got this planet on edge at the tip off since i took command
then i flipped on quick to become an instant demand
forever i'll remember my fans but never again i may stand
but i made best out my friends from my plan to get big

i'll be damned if my kids will ever live bad
and i'll give em a chance to advance in this biz
whether success or a cramp, forever they're blessed
for a bit in their life span, i'll stay a winner with the bread

keepin dinner in our hands but no babysitter i am
i will send em to camp, never a quitter is my attempt when i exam
in my memories imbeds the pictures i adventured during my visit on land
as a figure liftin ambition with a vision because im rich understand

than many men have been livin bitchin cuz my mission's what i ran
beginnin to the finish, then entered the minute i had to end everything
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: black spot

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 22nd, '08, 18:20

that flow never stops

like yur work ethic

good drop
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