Intro...

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this is for a intro of a project im working on, there's someone spitting before me thats why i sorta jump out of no were at the start of the verse, the concept of the verse....well there isnt a concept, but what i did was the same thing nas did in the "book of rhymes" track, just checked through my book n worked and shape it into a verse that made sense


i like the rhyming in this but i still got to sqaure up the flow it also aint finished yet, but anywae, feed is apreaciate


you think you know me a rip a track slowly
you think you flow free, show me. lets go.
hip hops indented in my brain
but most rappers invented the migrane
although i must refrain my mouth from saying the names
coz im to low now, but, give me a label and ill show how
it happen that i flatten the supposedly hottest rapper with a snow plow
im spitting thats not luck, but ripping lost thoughts up
the thoughts i thought i lost but there back, whats up
they say the style dont match me, so what would the match be ?
be the same as every other catch be ?
and the underground dont really give a shit
less you rhyming 20 sylybles every line of your spit
so my lyrics are tactically trapped in track
some people call it mixing i call it a geniuos interact
but still my lyrics are the smartest leaving fuckers heartless
let me start this i got this, ill just inject infected rhymes
to perfect neglected lines would you correct respected minds ?
i would, thats the attitude i got, i spat a few and thought
that my gratitude was not, at the mood i sought

[SajN]

Really Good drop
The flow is there, but sometimes I fell out a bit, but maybe that's me.
And rhyming is also good
Keep it up

[Xray]

thats a flawless flow verse right there and i like these two lines

and the underground dont really give a shit
less you rhyming 20 sylybles every line of your spit

^^^so damn true

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^ thanx guys


@sajjad, yeh i liked that line myself lol simple but so true