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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 29th, '08, 16:38

so far in all my life I have Wanted Knowledge
these ghosts of my past are tha Haunted College
feelings of insecurity only Promise Smallness
walking in tha hall u think how Long Is All This
thats why I pay so much attention to Details
it's not about form or function it's about Resale
I want money tha easy way but I don't wanna See Jail
believe my lyrics if we don't achieve equality We Fail
being safe never sounded so much like an Order
terrorists living here and beyond our Borders
tha drama falls down on us heavy like a Mortar
combine too much stress and u've got Torture
tha choices we make ultimately Dictate Tha Tempo
I could think of a very Sick Fate Ta End Foes
cuz none of these threats are even Scaring Me
I know nothing in life has ever been Guarenteed
life gets hard trust me u'll be okay if u've Got Love
a better world exists it just has yet to be Thought Of
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Re: felt good witing this

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 29th, '08, 16:48

hell yeah bro :y: :y: reminds me of some of my earlier pieces, i did something that goes like...


"nothing is guaranteed in this world apparantly cuz im either a hero or a victim scared to breathe if nears the beast impairing me"
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: felt good witing this

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 30th, '08, 18:31

ayy, rain makin it rain on these hoes

awesome shit,believe me man i like the structure of this 1,easy to read,sick flow,dope lyrics
one on your sick drops :y:
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: felt good witing this

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 31st, '08, 01:49

Pretty dope dude, I liked it a lot and kinda related to it. Good choice of words :y:

Rain Matrix wrote:I want money tha easy way but I don't wanna See Jail
believe my lyrics if we don't achieve equality We Fail


That was my fav. bars.
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