Just a song i wrote to work on structure

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It's time for you to get motherfucking lost
before i shake the frost off my sawed off

hystericaly lyrically show that this frauds soft
barely breathin like a rod is stuffed in my esophagus

i feel the world deteriorating i might just bust
let this fucking knife gush with blood and rust

i was just joking im tripping this drugs a rush
lets them just combust until im drug in dust

tell i forget my name i reget all the pain
i was premeditating to react like a king

all the respect it would bring if i stayed strapped
i could just lay back cuz no one would say crap

cuz they would get their face capped then fillet wrapped
in a black hefty garbage bag throw in car and dragged

i told you im the hardest, fag and ur margins lag
way behind mine cuz u retreat i stay behind lines

so pray i dont find you first, pray i dont place
the kind of curse that will have you ridin hearse

ive been divine since birth that just my attribute
hope i dont catch you dude or im have to shoot

cuz i show no mercy see, people burst in glee,
at this diverse mc but im worst than any diease,

and better on many degrees i perform wonderfully
at a hundred and three, im blunted gawlee

ill demolish any mc like im muhammad ali,
i float like a butterfly, sting like a bee

i hope you have better rhymes than kevin federline
even if you do i have fucking eleven better lines

i sever spines straight up full body decapitation
they know if was me from the shotty lacerations

im past debating the motherfucking last captivating, rapper
deactivitatin actors the baddest last remaining influence

every time a dude spits i have to throw in my two cents
who since me can make there fucking vivid writes offend

im as cold as liquid nitrogen this sik kid with a mic again
leave ur face in a stifflin grin like u were poppin vicodin

[Ka0t1c]

there's some good stuff there but most of it is garbage and random thought that's just throwing a bunch of rhyming words together.

i say keep working at it but making it understandable would help you much better right now