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The Morgue.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 26th, '08, 21:16

This peice here was just written acapella. There is a certain flow for it to hear all the column rhyming and all the inner rhyming, so I hope you get it (there are a lot of short little pauses). I used a few little rhymes from some older raps that I liked and put them in here aswell.

Givin' up weed which means money for tracks//
More raps from Steve, I'll keep you running infact//
Because my skill's advancin', I'm in front of the pact//
I could kill like Manson, I just want all the cash//
Gimmie what you got, your pot, a few pops//
Your scotch, on the rocks, like 'Pac, I'm so hot//
"Jenny's on the block" on top a big cock//
Hop off for a second, I know that shit's soft//
Thinkin' I'ma stop? My stance is well//
A snowball's got a better chance in hell//
Just ask Noel, once it's on, it's on//
I don't forget the past, I don't forgive the wrong//
I am set to win, I will settle the score//
Without no effort in, I will heckle a whore//
Your raps are wackness, they'd be better off stored//
On your pad for practice, we are headed to the mourge//
So mourn//

Note: "Jenny on the block", I'm not talking about the J-Lo song, I'm talkin' about my ex. You'd know if you listened to my track "Another Whore"

Leave feedback please :)
Last edited by Steve Spag on Feb 27th, '08, 17:28, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 26th, '08, 23:23

I like it man nice should record well
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 27th, '08, 00:07

Rain Matrix wrote:I like it man nice should record well

Thanks a lot bro, I appreciate it. I'll probably end up recording, just 'cause I like the flow I use for it, lol.
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Arabian Shady » Feb 27th, '08, 13:51

Jenny's on the block" on top a big cock


practically laughed out loud at that 1!!!

its wiked,no doubt about that,steady n precise
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '08, 23:13

great post, i want more, i need more ahhhhhh, i love lyrics hahahahahaha... im insane :worship: :worship:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 2nd, '08, 01:34

Arabian Shady wrote:
Jenny's on the block" on top a big cock


practically laughed out loud at that 1!!!

its wiked,no doubt about that,steady n precise
peace


Thanks a lot bro, I appreciate it as usual :) haha.

Kaotic wrote:great post, i want more, i need more ahhhhhh, i love lyrics hahahahahaha... im insane :worship: :worship:


Thanks dude, glad you liked the peice.
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Epidemik » Mar 2nd, '08, 21:21

i liked it too.. consistant and definitly some good lines

especially liked the first line.
Givin' up weed which means money for tracks// solid starter
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Re: The Morgue.

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 2nd, '08, 21:25

Thats pretty dope
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