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Dark Carnival

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 14th, '08, 21:02

***(this aint finished but since im leaving tomorrow i might as well show u what i was working on...)



you "have to go" pick a smart "audible" instead of "startin bull" with that "bar you flow"
which "has just no" "heart or soul" yet it's "art you call" so "apart you'll pull"

cuz until "all of your" "scars you show", it's gonna be a dark "carnival"
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Dark Carnival

Postby liljon » Mar 3rd, '08, 18:29

ha ha i like the ending
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