chicken scratch

[Epidemik]

Keep your eyes wide open, swollen n' never closin//
toke on the potent to keep your mind zonin //
You wont ever be dozin, whenever im composin //
cuz on the microphone it is known that i am golden //
I get in the zone, then expolde which leaves you folding //
behold my flow so controlled when its unfolding //
my rhymes are known to scold, untold and unspoken //
a cold and devoted poet is how you know him //

i dont write to much, so be easy with the reviews..
corrective critisizm appreciated as long as your not to negative with it haha

[Purple23Haze]

Well that was still pretty dope I'd buy it
Was that all about bein in the zone?

[Ka0t1c]

well ur chicken scratch is a nice read, so u can scribble on in my book!

[Epidemik]

Well that was still pretty dope I'd buy it
Was that all about bein in the zone?

ya basically.. just chicken scratch so not really any particular topic...

well ur chicken scratch is a nice read, so u can scribble on in my book!

haha thanks man. appreciate it!!

[Purple23Haze]

Is that what that means cool

[Steve Spag]

Very sick drop dude. I liked the structure for it and the flow was done good aswell. Deffinetly can't wait to see some more, try elaboratin' on it.

[Epidemik]

Very sick drop dude. I liked the structure for it and the flow was done good aswell. Deffinetly can't wait to see some more, try elaboratin' on it.

hey thanks man.. will do. appreciate the feedback!

[Arabian Shady]

Very sick drop dude. I liked the structure for it and the flow was done good aswell. Deffinetly can't wait to see some more, try elaboratin' on it.

damn dude u said it all
was wiked,no doubt but i felt it was very short.
peace

[Epidemik]

Very sick drop dude. I liked the structure for it and the flow was done good aswell. Deffinetly can't wait to see some more, try elaboratin' on it.

damn dude u said it all
was wiked,no doubt but i felt it was very short.
peace

thanks man. appreciate the feed! maybe ill add to it.