Ha I love yous I'm troubled and juggled so puzzled

[Purple23Haze]

yea i guess i just straight up went off i was in the zone so my shit wasn't real structured or on any particular topic so thanx for the feedback but I don't just try to rhyme sometimes I just go off on what ever pops in my head I'm past the tryin to rhyme everything stage dawg for real but thanx

[Arabian Shady]

the fact that you CAN find so many multis toa simple syllable is wiked but they were extremely unnecesery.if u took some of them and revolved them around a story line of evn based it on sumthing it would be sick,i promise that much
but it was like a freakin multi's cocktail where no 1 knew wat they were readin.
i suggest u take McMaybe's advice n practice.
he is one of the illest here n has a lotta experience behind his review,so dont think that he bitch slapped ur ass for nuthin he was just tryin to give u advice.
chill out n practice
peace

[Purple23Haze]

Cool

[Crossova16]

shit wud sound hott if yu didnt know the language..kuz it barely made sence..

if you take ur time yu cud prob write some good shit... just make sence wid da rhymez and take ur time homy


keep writin

[Purple23Haze]

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