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What Are U Saying

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 5th, '08, 20:15

even tho this pain Hurts Him one thing is for Certain
he is still that Person staying up all night Working

trying to get a Verse In disecting lines like a Surgeon
now his mind is Bursting with many Versions of Earths Sin

he is far from Urban but his style is free from Burdens
I closed that Curtain took a bow and everything Worsened

see opressions Face Of Blood maybe it will Wake Ya Up
some ignore it and Take Ta Drugs cuz they Hate Tha Love

united we stand divided we Fall a revolution Calls
some hide behind Walls leavin no time to Stall

why bask in tha Sorrow if we don't even have that Tomorrow
tha money we've Borrowed always seems to play tha Star Role

in our Peoples Streets it's hard to get rich Legally
thats why we See No Peace were not out of Evils Reach

as long as u Can lend a helping Hand to yur fellow Man
so defend this Land lets make Plans to finally Expand

I long ta get free Bush's lies bomb us steady I'm not wrong tha drama's deadly
diamonds on ya neck piece will they outlast this dawn of trauma check please

I slay fakers there day breaks first like those wage takers tha same ones who make paper
so u pay bankers my exchanges rates greater then all those who decide to play trader

I'm as fierce as a raptor preying on mc's like their scattered slayings plastered paintings
of leaving tha tattered laying as I make um see tha other side like backwards framing
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Re: What Are U Saying

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 6th, '08, 17:23

i'ma just have to go wid the title man
it was nice but it wasnt dope.get wat i mean??
i mean wen i compare it 2 ur drops a few days back this 1 aint that gd man.
maybe its the way i'm readin it or sumthin or mayb its 2 deep for me ta understand.
thnx for postin tho
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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