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All of My Life

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All of My Life

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 11th, '08, 09:12

all of my life ive been searchin for what is right
but it doesnt turn out just like i thought so i
am not certain where to drive my journey
i've tried to return to my mind but burdens outside divert me from mine
well im learnin to fight and in my journal i write
whatever concerns me that night
but surely some time these worries will try to disturb me no lie
still im not in a hurry, yet im working to rise as a wordsmith who's wise
so nocturnal or light, i murder the mic, hurtin the type deservin air strikes
while it's worth this long hike to climb the surface up vertical heights

this is my personal flight, to rhyme courage must i find, not revert into crime
i've got a purpose, a prize and a girlfriend circlin disquised
but it's early, God why's the world its' size? im burnin my eyes by versin mankind...

(i see my challenges and it stings)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: All of My Life

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 13th, '08, 01:07

"so nocturnal or light, i murder the mic, hurtin the type deservin air strikes
while it's worth this long hike to climb the surface up vertical heights"

I liked this the rest is too simple step it up
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Re: All of My Life

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 13th, '08, 04:36

yeah, you're absolutely right, thanx
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: All of My Life

Postby Epidemik » Mar 13th, '08, 19:42

:y: :y:
nice drop!
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