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Several Levels

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Several Levels

Postby blitches » Apr 2nd, '08, 15:15

theres several diffent levels to raisin hell, many ways to pass
for a crazy killer dressed in red wearin a jason mask
the first is to commit the worst murder the city has ever heard of
the second is to visit a bitches grave and dig the dirt up
the third is to flip the bird, smoke some herb, reburry the corpse
and then the fourth is to stare at the sun till your eyes are scorched
the fifth is to spit as sick as this
the sixth is to admit youre a sick misfit that likes to spit shit
to get pricks pissed at the shit you just spit
then the seventh one is to go back to the second one
only now you wanna use a heavy gun
then skip to the eleventh one
put away the gun, grab a clever and chop these bitches to pieces
kill yo nephews then marry each and every one of your nieces
and leave em as soon as you get up to three diseases
and if you start to hear demons speak to you in your sleep then
take the fuckin gun you dropped, shoot yourself why you sleepin
and if you survive it, then go back all the way to the first step
jump off a buildin, dead and you aint even hit the dirt yet
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Re: Several Levels

Postby Emadyville » Apr 2nd, '08, 15:26

Nasty. Best rhymes I thought (even tho the whole thing was tight) was second one, heavy, guns, eleventh one. Good Work!! :y:
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