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To My Last Breath ( Full song)

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To My Last Breath ( Full song)

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 17th, '08, 00:03

I make it Rain on tha Mic it's tha Same in my Life
these Flames I Recite u can't Change what I Write

bringing Brains to tha Fight I'm Training my Sight
stay Sane with tha Price innocence Slain every Night

feeling Pain from tha Knife tha Gain is Precise
these Chains that I Fight as I Wager tha Dice

after Back-Stabbin by these Wack-Rapping
never Had-Passion always Half-Action
wanna be Black-Dragon That's Bragging
I call it Trash-Trapt-In Cash-Chasms

I'm not Stressing Beef put down yur Weapon Please
when u Rest In Peace don't forget to Mention Me

we need to get Paper without all tha Labor
hustling and Day Work inhaling weed Vapors

shown as Vile Addicts who cant File Taxes
they see my Styles Magic while living Wild Status


I sit back and form a Thesis
as my brothers torn ta Pieces
some exploit ya Weakness
cuz they don't know what Peace Is
and thats why we Have Death
and thats how they Cash Checks
who follows their Path Next
I'll avoid it to my Last Breath

do u know Kaidens Dad this world's kinda Made Him Mad
it seems like he's Aging Fast he keeps on Slaying Wacks

ask where I'm Staying At tha answers just Stating Facts
theres nothing that I'm Taking Back.. spit truth Lacing Tracks

those fakes Making Rap don't put yur Faith In That
crooked cops Raiding Pads I bring heat like Cajun Snacks

hope u Get Tha Music.. these mics getting Executed
similar to suicide yall just Set Ta Lose It

my jaw just sets the Movement feel it in ya heart and soul
frail words Darkened Holes I won't Start to let Go

there's Meaning in my Rhymes were Dreaming of Nines
still Leaning towards a Time yur Screening my Mind

I'm Screaming are u Blind don't get Beaten by tha Grind
u'll get Eaten to tha Spine if these Demons wanna Dine

ull get blamed for the Crime so dont open Doors Up
decisions made For Us and thats what this War Does
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Apr 22nd, '08, 13:17, edited 11 times in total.
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Re: Seeing It

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 17th, '08, 00:15

I liked the end thats it, whats with plain shit man put more depth in a verse theres more in this universe to be covered. Sorry I'm pist today so I call it how I see it! And I'm sayin it to you cause you might get what I'm sayin!
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Re: Seeing It

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 17th, '08, 01:47

^^^ I've been writing simpler rhymes to practice flow
cuz I record and audios are where it's at

besides when I went all complex on u cats u told me it didn't make sense
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Re: Seeing It

Postby Emadyville » Apr 17th, '08, 03:08

I liked the ideas, the ending was nice, yeah it was simple like he said, but I could tell u tried and was at least doubling, good work
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Re: Seeing It

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 17th, '08, 04:06

Fuck that shit rain I know your smart and I want to compare my intelligence so do a complex one for me your most complex and its cool practise flow sorry I was pist earlier. peace
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Re: Seeing It

Postby Xplode » Apr 17th, '08, 06:10

practicing flow :y: end was guddddd but as Purple said ur SMART go for hard one :y: :flower:
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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Re: Seeing It

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 18th, '08, 10:43

come on man :angry:

ur flow tops the chart even wen u do go atom n bring out that complex shit,its a couple retards who cant read-fuk 'em
dont lower ur standard for a couple of dumb fuks,like purple said ppl actually compare ur shit to try n improve so if u fuk up we have endless self proclaimed "rappers".
get ur shit strait man,hit em bak wid the bomb,
but if u reali do think it helps u improve then do wat u have 2,just come bak strong,
peace :8)
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Till My Last Breath ( Full song)

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 19th, '08, 19:41

will be recorded soon... whatchu thinking
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