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NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 27th, '08, 20:28

Havn't wrote in a few days really, so I just got in from blazin' and got really motivated. It was written to Mister KA's "Traktion" on soundclick. I'm probably gonna put this track on my LP that I'll release over the net during the summer. Hope you get the flow to it, and let me know what you think please.

You people think I'm a prick, but I ain't provin' you wrong//
I'm actin' rude in my songs, I've been foolish for soo long//
I'm sick being just nice, I'm being pushed from inside//
This demon is now alive, so don't you look in his eyes//
I heard it causes some agony, who's up to try?//
Who's up to slayin' this beast? You must be hooked to my rhymes//
You don't know me at all but I am crooked and wise//
And I ain't shook by your lies 'cause you're a puss with no bite//
But all this drama surrounds me and yeah the karma is hounding//
From all the shit that I've done, I tried to hide and it found me//
I don't know who to trust, so fuck ya'll to who doubt me//
'Cause your opinions are shit, and I will say it out proudly//
And if you date me and bug me, this shit'll get soo disgusting//
I won't be thinking of you 'cause you'll be wasted to nothing//
And you could hate me or love me or you could face me or judge me//
But which ever the way it's played out, the fans will still bump me//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 27th, '08, 20:41

Chet wrote:I think this is your most lyrical verse I've seen from you :worship:

I had to stop a couple times and reread parts to understand them (It's like a tongue twister for my mind, but I'm sure it would sound fine when you actually spit it.)

I'm sick being just nice, I'm being pushed from inside//
This demon is now alive, so don't you look in his eyes//
I heard it causes some agony, who's up to try?//

So the demon is inside you? or is the demon you?

really good verse, very lyrical, track is gonna be hot, I'm gonna have to check that beat out

Great job

you misspelled copyright...now I can steal it :shifty:

lmao.
Glad you liked the peice bro, I appreciate your feed as always, lol.
And I was sayin' the demon WAS inside of me, and now it's out.

Again, thanks for the feed man :)
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Tornado » Apr 27th, '08, 20:43

damm nice verse..sounds like early eminem
can't wait to hear it
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 27th, '08, 20:58

Tornado wrote:damm nice verse..sounds like early eminem
can't wait to hear it

Merci :) lol
I'm probably gonna be recording this during the week.
I may upload it here once it's mastered.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Emadyville » Apr 27th, '08, 21:59

Some decent rhymes and a few doubles, good job
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 28th, '08, 01:41

Emadyville wrote:Some decent rhymes and a few doubles, good job

Thanks dude, glad you enjoyed it.

Keep the feed comin' peeps, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Ka0t1c » Apr 29th, '08, 05:18

yeah man, thats def u and it feels nice, i do however think it is a bit too soft for what it really could be.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby -[Zach]- » Apr 29th, '08, 06:30

pretty damn lyrical and real. i liked the whole feel to it man. short but still very nice. very good job :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 29th, '08, 22:00

Thanks for the feed guys, I appreciate it!

I finished up writting the whole track yesterday, so I'm deffinetly recording it sometime this week. Probably Friday or Saturday I'll be uploading it to the Audio Section, so be on the look out.

Keep the feed comin' please.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby SajN » Apr 30th, '08, 13:34

Really impressin drop!
I think it's the most lyrical drop I've seen from you :y: ... just like Chet said

You have good rhymes, and the flow was very good :y:

So just get it recorded :smoking:


And yeah, the last pasrt of the drop was really good :y:


Keep It Up!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - You People

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 30th, '08, 16:47

The Infection wrote:Really impressin drop!
I think it's the most lyrical drop I've seen from you :y: ... just like Chet said

You have good rhymes, and the flow was very good :y:

So just get it recorded :smoking:


And yeah, the last pasrt of the drop was really good :y:


Keep It Up!

Thanks bro.

I actually wrote the last 4 bars first, lol. I couldn't think of what to write, and that's all that hit me when I heard the beat, and I just worked the rest from there, lol.
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