tripped out lyrical mind fuck

[Ka0t1c]

i'm prepared for my war with my lyrics airborne so my spirit can form
and my peers will absorb my tears that i've mourned over years
cuz i have worn all my fears so the storm i must share
my story's well, sorta dear
don't ignore, it's still water clear
shall i report it from right here?
no portal was near and importance appeared distorted
aware of my portrait just blared
now contortin repairs my own torment
i dare you to destroy the mirrors Hell's exploited:
yet my ideas spell the choices
and i do bare the true horrid nightmare at the moment
"tell them more" in my ear i can hear but it's pointless
i just know that to cure my poison endurance premiers
then my voice interferes with the orbit it steers

[Steve Spag]

Pretty dope man. Crazy flow for it, took me a little bit to get it, but it's pretty tight.
Keep it up.

If you could get a chance, could you feed my new peice "You People"? I'd appreciate that.

[Emadyville]

I'll be honest. If you work on that some more, and really have it flow straight through and make all the rhymes fit and make sense perfectly, that would be some insanely dope shit. I'm not saying it's not good, it's one of the best lyrical I've ever read on here, I'm just saying with tweeking it it could be even better. Keep it up

[Rain Matrix]

yur abstrack rhyme scheme kicks ass... yur flow is tight
keep dropping it ill

[Ka0t1c]

thanx guys i really appreciate ur feed...i've got to get back in the groove again, for real... when i get my act straight, ima get a mic and show u my skills on audio, then u can feel the emotions i put into my words and hopefully things will make more sense....peace'


and Steve Spag... I mos def like ur style on most of ur word, in particular ur new ones, keep it up...i knew that u would be able to step it up and keep this place HOT!!!!!!!

keep burnin...

[-[Zach]-]

damn man. i liked your word choice alot. it wasn't regular ass small words. there was alot of multiple syllable words there. i liked that. plus it was lyrical as hell. kinda dark too man. very good job

[Steve Spag]

and Steve Spag... I mos def like ur style on most of ur word, in particular ur new ones, keep it up...i knew that u would be able to step it up and keep this place HOT!!!!!!!
keep burnin...

Thanks for the respect bro, means a lot to me. You keep your shit up too, you keep gettin' better and better.

[Ka0t1c]

oh yeah, ive got to get me a nice mic, ne ones in particular great ones to check out when i look???