NEW STEVE SPAG - Time A Tell

[Steve Spag]

Well I got this beat from a fan of mine, it's called Time A Tell and it's got a really catchy melody for it. It's a really different beat and so I wrote to it. I just wrote this now and it's a little rough but let me know what you think. The flow is kinda different, but hopefully you find the right one for it, lol. Anyways, let me know what you think.

I never thought it'd be like this, the way my life's lived//
The pain fits right in the veins on my skin//
I remain intact while you complain in pacts//
While you circle around me saying negative crap//
The scars will not fade, the harm will not cease//
The heart inside of me, won't stop for anything//
The flame has been burning, it's 100 degrees//
You should be backing away 'cause I'm a fuckin' emcee//
I ain't yappin' for nothing, I just follow my dreams//
And ya'll are followin' me, you know I gotta succede//
If The Secret's to work, well shit you gotta believe//
So put your pride into Steven, I got a goal to achieve//
Everybody around me should celebrate in this peace//
While I will grace on these beats which you relate as just mean//
I am just being me, this is a story to tell//
And all you phonys can blow me, 'cause ya'll are boring as hell//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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[Kaizre]

lol ! that was a cool verse, keep it up.
in the future you might become dope

Holla

[Rain Matrix]

When u keep it real... u keep it moving... so keep it up

[Arabian Shady]

wiked wiked shtuff steve,
u maintained the flow,it was constant.!
sick shit
peace

[Wallace]

Good flow and lyrics. This gave ideas of how I can improve my flow, using simple and direct phrases, cuz my flow is all bad, I tung twist on my rap's all the time

[Twiz]

Awesome! How long you've rapped? Do you have pictures somewhere?

[Steve Spag]

Awesome! How long you've rapped? Do you have pictures somewhere?

Thanks, lol. I've been writing for like my whole life, but only started taking my rap serious like 3 years ago. Check out my myspace, http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

Add me up

[Ka0t1c]

I am just being me, this is a story to tell//
And all you phonys can blow me, 'cause ya'll are boring as hell//

thats my fave. part