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* Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

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* Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby yoshi » Mar 20th, '08, 14:30

A. wrote:So much anger but i do love this earth, i'm like an earthquake I shok the world
i'm like an gun, i do pop the words and while jay-z Rock-da-fella's, i do rock the girls
my lines can make the body of 2pac work, I can make all noobs fuck nerds.


This power makes fat kids turn thin, makes all library books turned in
makes every thug learning, every water burning, makes all the dudes flirting

the source of the writing, is the source of life,you say i got nothing but i got the source of time
you need training and of coarse tons of rhymes, you should write your own lines don't come get mine

lirycs can make emotions fade away, images can make slomotion change the day
i can replace feelings ten times as good, twenty times as bad
but it can't make me get time on school, so i have to get out of bed





B. wrote:I can seem completely Mysterious I'm really not trying to come across Delirious
in my mind I get Furious trying to reach to tha Curious keep yur lyrics Serious

to me music is a Lifeline and I know Nice Lines can get u through Tight Times
are u afraid of what u Might Find in Life's Rhymes I'll continue to Write Mine

I used to get Picked On living in a trailor With Mom and dad where I Sit Gone
remembering a Sick Song as I start to Hit Chron seeing all my pros With Cons

rap is what I Love it's like tha Hug or embrace u thought Of cuz u needed a Bud
to talk u through Stuff when it's too Much so if I had no pen I'd write in Blood

it's our people that Matter Most so I treasure all tha feedback I get After Posts
homeless in Tattered Clothes I'd still write for someone else's Shattered Hopes



C. wrote:They say this music is nothing but the root of all evil
and it's got the force to make you do stuff illegal
they used to call it the people's artistic expression
and it's now it's like a grudge they hold against you
for the way you talking and dressing.
Then these cynical critics are all up on your ass
for the words you spew in your lyrics
like "so and so" just said "this and that"
and you so-called experts must be missing the fact
that we say what's on our mind
like feelings, it's love or hate,
and that's something you can't undermine or take.


D. wrote:I'm feeling down and stressed so I just grab a pen//
And it affects my tension, puts a rest like zen//
I've confessed my sins, I've let people see//
Who I am inside, I'm a true emcee//
I expand my thoughts and I explore my dome//
I don't command your props, but don't ignore my tone//
This music is healing everything that is hurt//
From all the scars of the past, to my heart in the dirt//
I got the smarts of a fox while I drop ink on the sheet//
This is the power of writing so don't be fucking with me//
Maybe wrote:I'm so awesome, I don't mind looking desperate.

Chet wrote:Fuck House. If I wanted to watch a sarcastic person in the medical field, I would stalk Yoshi :8)
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Re: * Power of Writing

Postby C-Game » Mar 20th, '08, 14:32

BAR , XRAY , NS STart votin ASAP...

vote in theses

Message Delivered (topic ) -
Structure /Flow -
Rhymes /Multies -
Complexity -
Other -

every cat out of 10

for each drop...
and add them up and send ur scoresheet to yoshi.....
once ur done votin POST IN THIS THREAD tellin ur DONE...
once all 4 are done... we will tally it up and post the 2 winners...
and the people who pariticpated DO NOT POST IN HERE or YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED>..
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Re: * Power of Writing ( START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Mar 20th, '08, 16:48

VOTED.....

sent to yoshi....
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Re: * Power of Writing ( START VOTING NOW )

Postby SajN » Mar 20th, '08, 17:01

VOTED!
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: * Power of Writing ( START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Apr 16th, '08, 10:12

will announce the 2 winners on this topic tonight,..,
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Re: * Power of Writing ( START VOTING NOW )

Postby C-Game » Apr 25th, '08, 18:54

MY VOTE....

A

Message Delivered (topic ) - 8
Structure /Flow - 4
Rhymes /Multies - 8
Complexity - 5
Other - liked the 3-4 bar... im givin a good 7 for that
32

B

Message Delivered (topic ) - 7
Structure /Flow - 8
Rhymes /Multies - 8
Complexity - 7
Other - 7 ( 3 - 4 bar )
37

C

Message Delivered (topic ) - 5
Structure /Flow - 4 end lines didnt rhyme kinda ruined it for me
Rhymes /Multies - didnt c much 3
Complexity - 5
Other - 5
22

D

Message Delivered (topic ) - 8
Structure /Flow - 7
Rhymes /Multies - 6
Complexity - 7
Other - good end.and some good lines in between. 7
35

=========infections vote

NAME - A

Message Delivered (topic ) - 8
Structure /Flow - 7
Rhymes /Multies - 8
Complexity - 7
Other - 8
38

Name - B

Message Delivered (topic ) - 8
Structure /Flow - 9
Rhymes /Multies - 9
Complexity - 8
Other - 9
43

Name - C

Message Delivered (topic ) - 8
Structure /Flow - 7
Rhymes /Multies - 8
Complexity - 8
Other - 9, enjoyed it
40

Name - D

Message Delivered (topic ) - 6
Structure /Flow - 7
Rhymes /Multies - 6
Complexity - 5
Other - 6
30
===

A = 70
B = 80
C = 62
D = 65

Winner on this is B...who ever it is post ur name here

good job guys
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Re: * Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 26th, '08, 02:15

I'm psyched... long live trshady.com
I can't forget to mention there was many other good drops

I'll keep writing my best
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Re: * Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby C-Game » Apr 26th, '08, 04:22

who is A...
congrats rain...

goin to final round is
rain , m-prye...
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Re: * Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby M-Pyre » Apr 26th, '08, 13:37

congrats, guess we'll be battling against each other now...good luck, but you won't need it, cause your ill as a motherfucker!


it's M-Pyre btw ;) ^
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Re: * Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 26th, '08, 18:14

Congrads brother :y:
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Re: * Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby Marth » May 1st, '08, 16:43

I worte verse A geuss i'm second :)
good work guys nice lyrics
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Re: * Power of Writing ( Winner Anounced )

Postby Ka0t1c » May 1st, '08, 21:06

congrats Rain, AYO!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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