Surface is Changing

[Ka0t1c]

as the surface is changing im thinking that maybe surely im crazy
cuz im just sinking im certain cuz circular ways i am turnin basically like a whirlwind daily
but im not throwing my furniture these days, im facing my failing
so mature yet slowly cuz working turns me biserk
and i know that im showing im lazy lately which hurts
yet im searching for words explaining on Earth
my urges, my placement and my courage
so by training i've learned to be an expert
there aint no more complaining
i've returned from the desert
i've been exposed to my own personal Hades
but my journey's got better cuz internally hating has let up
my every letter escapes me from the measures we were taking now im fed up
Kaotic lets the expressions of chaos relay in the wave links
start praying, Armageddon's awaiting and the Angels are reigning...

[Emadyville]

Didn't flow right to me, just my opinion. Needs work is my only advice, o and get rid of those simple rhymes.

[Solace]

is this a rhyme or just a poem? if its a poem then its fine but if its supposed to rhyme...

[Ka0t1c]

well it does rhyme but it's fast paced and im sure i structured it wrong... hate it or love it, thats fine with me as long as u understand every word's true meaning is all im looking for.