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Diss verse

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 08:47

Ayo..

Its a Seagul Callin Feastival For hungry its a bagel Cream Felling Too bad he got that Bagel-belly

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^Nuff said



He'll be spreading it heavenly While Eating-Meat and Matzoh Men Cheifs just saw him look he screamed!

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Hungry aint even gunna be midstream let alone mainstream! SelfExpress is the supreme-Team
Were crushin any kind of A-Team Fat boy with a machine thinkin hes all mean! Ima crush your theme

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Nigga get some-screens PMin me askin for collabs-Cant even fuck our scheme Ya its fuckin blaspheme!
Nigga its gunna be a blood-stream Ya need ta lower your Steam Beatin me is just another one of your dreams!
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Re: Diss verse

Postby JMG » Apr 29th, '08, 08:55

im not impressed
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Diss verse

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 08:56

JMG wrote:im not impressed


Good for you :smoking:
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Re: Diss verse

Postby JMG » Apr 29th, '08, 09:24

u no who i am right
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Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Diss verse

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 29th, '08, 15:27

dont really care?
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Re: Diss verse

Postby Solace » May 3rd, '08, 01:43

JMG ive seen what u write on other peoples stuff (i remember one you said that i saw earlier today."u suck"). i think you may give the best critism on this forum.
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Re: Diss verse

Postby JMG » May 3rd, '08, 06:23

i just come real with it
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Diss verse

Postby Xray » May 3rd, '08, 06:47

JMG wrote:u no who i am right

:laughing: why acting hard for? :laughing:

and cool diss, but those pictures were disturbing as fuck.
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Diss verse

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 3rd, '08, 06:57

JMG wrote:i just come real with it


most of your comment have been negitave post your own shit so we can dogo on you :b:
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Re: Diss verse

Postby JMG » May 3rd, '08, 08:22

i got somethin in the works
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Re: Diss verse

Postby Twiz » May 4th, '08, 02:33

I don't understand that verse. So weird... :o
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