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Diss Freestyle

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Diss Freestyle

Postby Solace » May 10th, '08, 03:48

Hey heres a diss freestyle. Its not the best but im trying multies a lot.

Hey asshole I know im talented
because im the only normal white kid
in the neighboor hood thats up to no good
so fuck your rhymes and the shit you say
you fail everytime, you should go away
practice at home with some instrumentals
your a sentimental, mental patient thats oriental
later im gunna mess you up, detrimental

PLEASE ANYONE THAT VIEWS PLEASE COMMENT. no one ever comments on my stuff :(


ps. im not white. it just rhymed so...
Last edited by Solace on Sep 20th, '08, 23:28, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Diss Freestyle

Postby Dark Blue » May 10th, '08, 04:09

yaa what chet said
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: Diss Freestyle

Postby Tash8 » May 10th, '08, 04:25

i really hope that was an actual freestyle.
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