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SAVE HIP HOP!!!!

Postby Makaveli525 » May 8th, '08, 01:39

Look at me starin and think, ain't no comparin, it's sick
I just rip it as soon as I hear the snare and the kick
Drum on the beat, still the one you wouldn't question
How do I do it? I guess I feel a music connection
The blueprint, perfection in rhymes to make you rock your head
Like Nas said, we gettin to where hip hop is dead
It might be, so with my lyrics ima breathe life in
Scribble magic on the paper, call it speed writin
So peace to Pun, Eazy, Dirty, Big, Pac, and L
Tragically, all kings in hip hop that fell
This will in me, cause today it's our responsibility
As ill MCs, there are voids that we gotta fill in each
Area of rap, wipe the wack rappers off the map
Get rid of all the haters who gon stab us in the back
Turn the sound up, bring the rhythm, get to cue-ing the bass in
Hip hop is ours, we can start a new generation
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Re: SAVE HIP HOP!!!!

Postby Emadyville » May 8th, '08, 01:52

Not bad, I enjoyed that one, wish it was longer :y:
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Re: SAVE HIP HOP!!!!

Postby Ka0t1c » May 8th, '08, 06:28

it's pretty good, and it's got a great message! love it! :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: SAVE HIP HOP!!!!

Postby -[Zach]- » May 8th, '08, 06:48

damn man. that was hot right there. i really enjoyed. very lyrical and very nice message. very good job man
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: SAVE HIP HOP!!!!

Postby Nu Syd » May 8th, '08, 08:28

nice read man :b:
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Re: SAVE HIP HOP!!!!

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 10th, '08, 22:54

Really nice job, keep up the good work.
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