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Just a sample

Postby Robbie G » May 12th, '08, 01:45

Don't ever try to compare me it's scary
on my own level with the virgin Mary
I don't need a Dre beat, or Nikes on my feet
don't need to be gangster, don't need to live on the street
to rhyme words and a letter, just enjoy it
I'm wearing a damn sweater, and I still destroy it
enjoy the hard beat, don't go too fast
dirty and sweet, each song could be your last
The leaders always fall, so it's better to stay low
plateau and be constant this much I know
your time has come and now your gone
in this huge world were all just a pawns

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How do you guys feel about this? Just a short part from a verse I just wrote. I just found a way top record so wondering if I should do this..

For some reason I always think what I right is good than I look back the next day and go wtf..so yeah comments? :y:
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Re: Just a sample

Postby Rain Matrix » May 12th, '08, 15:49

nice flow... yur really improving
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