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"Letter to Proof"

Postby shadyallday » May 1st, '08, 19:37

its been 2 years and we cant forget ur legacy/ aint nobody better than P/ u always gonna be a legend in the D/ this is the best way to grieve, u will always be missed, rest in peace/ to be honest, we gonna miss u rappin/ Searching for Jerry Garcia was an instant classic/ what happened to u shouldnt have happened/ u should still be in the studio with Em, Dre, and 50/ making hit records with Kon, Kuniva, Bizarre and Swifty/ u should be here yelling Iron Fist/ theres no denyin this/ ur like a mentor and a huge influence to anyone whoever picked up a mic and spit/ u not being here, i'll admit it sucks/ but at least u can kick it with Bugz/

this is my letter to Proof/ u aint with us no more thats the terrible truth/ we gonna keep playing ur songs, i think that'll get us through/ even though ur gone ur still here in the spiritual/ we wont stop missing u/

man its been crazy these last 2 years/ the game hasn't been the same without u here/ u put ur heart and soul in all ur raps/ when i first heard of ur death it made me fall back/ it was just wrong, knowing we wouldn't hear Proof on a new verse or a new song/ but man u shoulda seen Em/ he was distraught over losing his best friend/ just knowing that u wouldnt be there to hang out again. to hang out with him/ the medics tried to get u to the hospital but u were DOA/ we all figured u would be okay/ but u were gone, and we got a Proof tribute song from Obie and Dina Rae/ this letter is a goodbye from all ur fans/ we appreciate everything u ever did for us man...thank u/

at ur funeral, we celebrated ur life/ thousands of fans came out to say their goodbyes/ at that moment it made them realize/ that u touched a lot of people, u had a huge impact on their lives/ on a personal note, u shoulda heard Em's eulogy, man the words that he wrote/ they were from the heart and he was speaking for all of us/ he told us that u gave everyone u ever met nothing but love/ i just wrote this to let u know how we're all feeling/ we miss u and even though its been a couple years we're still reeling/ we can never get that image out of our head/ there was an altercation and Proof was shot dead/ you've never shown the world nothing but love dude/ thats why i'm saying ur fans will always love u, peace/
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Big Proof 4ever » May 1st, '08, 19:58

record it :y:
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Emadyville » May 1st, '08, 20:31

Good tribute :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Ka0t1c » May 1st, '08, 21:04

thats pretty cool! :) :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: :b:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 1st, '08, 23:36

No offence but did you ACTUALLY know proof?
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Solace » May 2nd, '08, 01:51

that was beautiful :y: lol its like hes one of ur best friends. (like djblue said "No offence but did you ACTUALLY know proof?")
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 2nd, '08, 14:07

I'm just sayin dont write songs about your fans and act like you know them this song reminds me of Stan. i"m not saying it wasn't good it was deep but its just a bit creepy you would write all this over a dude you just heard on a record or seen on a T.V., know what I mean?
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Twiz » May 5th, '08, 11:59

I liked that "letter". Proof = :y:
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Dark Blue » May 12th, '08, 13:15

record that
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: "Letter to Proof"

Postby Rain Matrix » May 12th, '08, 15:53

proof was undeniable his game was as intellectual as it was gripping
it was one of a kind and it will be truly missed by all who appreciate raps best mc's

oh yeah if this was my drop... I'd record it :8)
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