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felt like writing something..

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » May 8th, '08, 00:37

I just felt like writing something.. :sweating:


i'm in a pitch black deep hole stuck underground
haven't found the light but been searchin around
the only sound i hear is when my heart pounds
out of breath drowned alive in my own tears
i've had this fear in me thru all these years
it never seems to disappear while my ears bleed
i proceed tryin' to stampede my way to succeed
but i feel like its almost guranteed that i'll concede
¤°~ Jose ~¤°©
 

Re: felt like writing something..

Postby Dark Blue » May 8th, '08, 00:50

keep going with it i like it
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Re: felt like writing something..

Postby Xray » May 8th, '08, 01:19

good shit man :y:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: felt like writing something..

Postby Emadyville » May 8th, '08, 01:53

Decent start, could develope :y:
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Re: felt like writing something..

Postby -[Zach]- » May 8th, '08, 07:22

very promising. abstract even. i liked it. good job man :y:
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: felt like writing something..

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » May 12th, '08, 16:55

thanx glad you liked it :sweating:
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