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Postby Ka0t1c » May 15th, '08, 08:55

yo im really ready to go, im gettin at them all
they never thought kaotic had a flow
i got them actin so retarded and they know
for started up some bull im pullin apart their torsos
they are fallin far from normal...
im gonna be large when i show
im in charge of my own
as a star, many roads
that means far i have drove
without a car while alone
microphones are my targets to zone
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: ready to go

Postby Ka0t1c » May 15th, '08, 17:03

this was just flowin with no particular direction, just random thoughts thru a drunk lunatic...me
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: ready to go

Postby Steve Spag » May 15th, '08, 19:28

Yeah you can do much better man, lol.
Below your regular standards, but keep on writting brotha.

If you could, could ya feed my new peice and let me know what ya' think?
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Re: ready to go

Postby -[Zach]- » May 16th, '08, 05:50

relatively mediocre but i still thought it was good. keep it up :y:
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