NEW STEVE SPAG - All Alone

by **Steve Spag** » May 15th, '08, 07:27

Just wrote this to a beat on my downstairs computer. There's a certain flow for it you may not get, but hopefully you do. Anyways, check it out and let me know what you think.

I sit here locked inside my room, the rain is pouring down//
I keep on fighting with my thoughts, it's probably boring to you now//
It's just a story that I tell, and I'm gonna speak it loud//
'Til my voice is strained and gone, I can't afford to put it out//
I gotta set the record straight, what goes around will come around//
When you do not see it coming, it will take you to the ground//
It will drag you by the legs, it will hang you upside down//
And leave you broken as a man, like a crab without it's shell//
Inside my heart there is a void and I can't help but be annoyed//
'Cause I am tortured by these people that I used to call my boys//
Everybody that I trusted, they played me like a toy//
I was just rusted to the core, there ain't no way I was enjoyed//
I got no problems with commitment, except when I'm employed//
But I just try to make a difference, I don't try to dissapoint//
I want this pain to be diminished, taken down and be destroyed//
'Cause reminiscin' is a bitch that I just wish I will avoid//

COPYWRIGHT: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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by **-[Zach]-** » May 15th, '08, 07:36

very good man. i don't know if i got the flow right but the way i said it worked lol. either way though very deep. i feel it for real. keep it up :y:

by **Nu Syd** » May 15th, '08, 11:21

^ what he said :b:

by **Steve Spag** » May 15th, '08, 16:03

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you liked it

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And Zach, I just fed your newest peice up there.

Keep the feedback coming please.

by **Ka0t1c** » May 15th, '08, 19:33

this piece is a great one, i would definitely keep writing more to this. :y:

by **Arabian Shady** » May 16th, '08, 12:11

sick shit steve!
did not have ne problems wid the flow,esay flow to grasp man.reali well written :y:

peace

by **Steve Spag** » May 16th, '08, 17:44

Again, thanks for the feed guys. I'll probably be writting a full song to this, just 'cause i liked the way this one turned out. I don't like the title for it though, but that can always be fixed.

Keep the feed comin' please.