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Haunting Dreams pt 2

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Haunting Dreams pt 2

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 14th, '08, 03:11

'I'm still haunted by those dreams every night
I said I'm still haunted by those dreams every night' 2x
Take the night-flight Where were goin you dont need a headlight
My words fly like a kite I still say show your light be damn polite
I'll crush your flashlight I look at this like its a goddamn cockfight
Yeah I'm white Yah I'm right and yeah you bet yeah I fuckin write
What height you want? What dream you want? bitch this is my steam
And I kill like a red beam Yall scream cause you dont get my theme
Still say my team is surpream and yeah fuck all fuckin mainstream
'I'm still haunted by those dreams every night
I said I'm still haunted by those dreams every night' 2x

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3TMJFvM6ERk
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Re: Haunting Dreams pt 2

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 16th, '08, 23:43

I didnt like it, it didnt fit the title, and it was too random.
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