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Postby Darkblade44431 » May 18th, '08, 19:33

i dont know what to call this, and if anyone has any ideas, please tell me. Anyways, here's another song i'm working on. I got one verse, the hook, and the chorus. And i know the hook and chorus are extremely long, but oh well.
Here it is:
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Makin deals with the devil, my soul is sold.
Man i got the heat, but my heart is cold.
You aint gonna speak when i bust this flow, cuz i'm takin it back to old school,
faggots always be so full, so full of shit,
cum is at the tip of their dick, they're suckin their own dick, and they're swallowin it,
all because these mutha fuckas wanted us, to stop bullyin their pussy friends and makin a fuss.
stupid little bitch, take the bus, again, you called the cops last time, said that you was bothered, by some men,
some men with crazed eyes, and some with shades, knives, they'll cut you up, I, would not tell a lie.
but thinkin back, maybe i did just to get by.

[HOOK]: You really dont think i'm crazy, do ya? not even at a time when my face is to ya?, my eyes are lazy bu they're racin for ya, ya betta think twice for you play with us. You sweat like you shy, you melt like some ice, so you betta just, go back to thinkin you're tough cuz u cuss, and let out your tears when you cry at night, cuz you cant even put up a fight.

[Chorus]: Just let all that shit out, when you're talkin about, people callin you out, that you wont do shit about, but now you're askin around, tellin people how, you're gonna sock em in the mouth and give it back to em now..but you aint gonna do shit, you're a pussy that's stupid, you're a fuckin bitch thats tryin to step to this new shit, well i've had it with your shit, and you're makin me sick, and if you aint gonna do it then i'ma have to start it...but i hate to bash on someone thats truly retarded(sounds different here).
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Postby Darkblade44431 » May 19th, '08, 02:48

Shit......this is awful....sorry.
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