Hip Hop Hoes

[judah]

Rap aint hip hop no more
Rap is a single as hoe only living for the Do'
There's still the root but no roots have been rooted
cause superman now flies through the hood but not for the wounded
this is some real drama
no fathers or teachers can now create a good stanza
and I can see how deep is this drama
cause its just recent but rappers already rhyme with Obama
hiphop was supposed to be a breeze of fresh air
but how,
if will smith is now a legend after being a prince in bell air
Am I supposed to criticise everyone?
or just keep doing my thang as KRS One
rappers are not mcs and mcs are dying for detox
but they just on the look out so they can act like a fox
my hopes are on a certain guy name doctor
the magician behind decades of success with this hip hop culture

[Emadyville]

I thought some lines were good, others need work, but really liked the concept.

[Ka0t1c]

no roots have been rooted
cause superman now flies through the hood but not for the wounded

that line is bad ass

but the rest im not besides the part where you added "Doctor" and "Culture" together to rhyme

[-[Zach]-]

pretty nice and real shit right there. i liked it. not mind-blowing but i still feel it was better then average. keep it up

[judah]

I got Say tanx to all ya'... I do rap, but I aint trying to go to the mainstream...
I am new in this forun but I promisse I am gonna burn this with some of thoughts, I'll be in the look out for your reviews...

No Roots have been rooted
cause superman now flies tru' the hood but not for the wounded...
One,

J

[Jay-19]

I liked this! I also thought that Superman-line were bad-ass! Really hot line right there man!