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Fucked up

Postby blitches » May 14th, '08, 22:14

Hook: aint nothin as fucked up as life
cant nothin get more fucked up than life
just a kid and went and fucked up his life
now he's mad enough to fuck up his wife


you know whats fucked up
a motherfuckin coke addict of a sister drugged up
shes a slave into it
and her dads the one who gave em to her
or how bout a 5 year old havin sex
wit his principle locked in the office after recess
he's comin home all ruffled up
his parents aint givin a fuck
if that dont get you then this will
a mother intentionally gettin her kids killed
she's payin off homeless to do it like
"make it look like an accident, you get one shot to do it right"
or maybe a little girl born wit cancer
told that she didnt have enough time to grow up to be a dancer
and how bout that chick porsha, who was forced to have an abortion
but she aint go to the clinic
her drunk father said lift up ya shirt and let me kick it
then drop ya pants so i can stick my dick in
knock you up a second time, we gon do it again

Hook: aint nothin as fucked up as life
cant nothin get more fucked up than life
just a kid and went and fucked up his life
now he's mad enough to fuck up his wife

second verse coming soon..........................
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Re: Fucked up

Postby Emadyville » May 14th, '08, 22:24

Better than the other one I guess
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Fucked up

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 14th, '08, 23:38

wow that was fucked up
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Re: Fucked up

Postby Darkblade44431 » May 15th, '08, 01:12

that was fucked up, but good job.
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Re: Fucked up

Postby judah » May 20th, '08, 14:21

I think that some lines were good, but I think that the real concept behind it lacks a bit...(seems like some brenda's gotta a baby xxi century). The concept I am talking about is sincerity.

feels like to dramatic to touch a person's soul.
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