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call me wrong

Postby Ka0t1c » May 22nd, '08, 01:06

you call me wrong for all ive done like ive fallen from above
but ive become numb and unloved, now im runnin out long
because when push comes to shove, i put on the gloves
and nothing good is gonna evolve, i should of drawn blood

im looking well beyond, not to be a rookie full of bugs waltzing in the lawn
cuz something which ive gone thru, thats cooking up a buzz
theres one truth, but it took us a walk, the booth has been dug
so our bodies could resolve corruption with the songs

do you seem lost, with no rules that are hidden within empty walls
you question if there is simply a Lucifer and God, well truly Ive got news
get to suitin up n box before the movie you watch is through
or your duty was the cost, still the saga resumes...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: call me wrong

Postby Nu Syd » May 22nd, '08, 08:23

good read :y:
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Re: call me wrong

Postby Steve Spag » May 22nd, '08, 22:44

Pretty good man.

Not as strong as some of your other shit, but it's still good. Always enjoy reading your peices. So keep it up dude :y:.
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