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Vayonic - freestyle - kyetext

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Vayonic - freestyle - kyetext

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 17th, '08, 02:05

Yo
Vayonic aint no sidekick Dont see him as a comic
Spit hit sick shit chick I done said My dicks a yardstick
i could kick ol nick cause any physic can tell im a prick
And oh his music sucks just cause its fuckin mystic
Could give a fuck bout your graphics motherfuckers
Its your fault I went drastic Ima about to kill you with fabric


I did this abot 5 minuets ago I know it don really make sense but its a freestyle what can I say :shifty:
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Postby Darkblade44431 » May 20th, '08, 21:35

ugh...sorry, but :n:
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Re: Vayonic - freestyle - kyetext

Postby Solace » May 21st, '08, 22:21

i know im no good at freestyling, but yea Darkside is right, :n: . It just seemed so random, example
i could kick ol nick cause any physic can tell im a prick


What the fuck does that mean. You can kick santa cuz a physcic can say your a prick? Come on Djblue, i know this isnt your full potential, ive seen your shit and its a lot better than this. Even for a freestyle its bad.
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Postby Kosovic » May 23rd, '08, 20:29

Uhhhh....really.....no. :n:
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