Abstract - Complex

[Ka0t1c]

Join me, let's take this world over if you're a soldier
don't be holding back, get to growing closer to your max
or are ya going to act like the fact is you're only falling fast
so's that what you wanna reflect as keeps flowing your lonely quest
cuz you're bored of combat, you support no war at your door's floor mat
you don't anymore explore for a chore important to absorb
cuz you're just old and poor, put some order into your rep
cuz the odor's I detect from an origin unmapped which orbits your head
you can't sort out the deck cuz you cornered your flesh
you're caught in a trap, formed by your past distorting your path
you bought into the bad, now it's been born to infect like swarmin insects
sent to torture you - hexxed, within til the story's due, then somebody comes next
the venom's immortal too, it's haunting thru text and living in audio
recording on wax, the lyrics find opticals for the spirit to wreck
appears a new obstacle, all peers who have the nearest contact

[Emadyville]

Um, goddamn. That was pretty sick, really lyrical, crazy flow, turn that shit into a song. Keep it up

[Xray]

not bad, but can use some work on a few lines for example the starting lines

Join me, let's take this world over if you're a soldier
don't be holding back, get to growing closer to your max
or are ya going to act like the fact is you're only falling fast
so's that what you wanna reflect as your lonely quest keeps flowing