let out my words

[Ka0t1c]

you will see that, when i let out my words
i do truly have a big thirst as every letter in my verse comes together like the first
cuz no matter my curse, im ready to disperse whatever pressure it exerts
cuz i wont settle being third or even second on this Earth
i'd rather leave an expert, not a shadow unobserved
ive battled threats in desert where death is the worst
but my weapon did work and i kept well alert
so i accept what im worth, no medal you can birth
will ever bring a special message which returns
to give leverage to the level where ive bettered and endured
myself with the courage, now the devil's been disturbed...

[Emadyville]

Sick shit, love the flow and rhymes, loved how you used the words in this, made a concept and shit

[Steve Spag]

SICKKKKKKKK drop bro. Really dope peice, kept the flow consistant, used a pretty good variety of words I havn't seen you use before. The ending was super-cool, haha. One of your best, by far.
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[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i really appreciate your input!

cheers!

[Kosovic]

Doesnt have flow. You need to have 15 syllables for each bar to flow.

[Ka0t1c]

you're crazy, you have absolutely no idea what you're talking about, this flows great

[Kosovic]

I always have an idea about what i am talking, now jump from your house's roof with your head down.

[Rain Matrix]

it flowed very nicely

[judah]

Nigga u come first u the best never the worse
only on God u can put ur soul and ur trust
I am not tryin' to rhyme again of course
I am just trying' to give u the proper feedback with no remorse.
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U did a crazy thing there man, made me see a Nas from the scratch!!!