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Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 23rd, '08, 20:41

alter what an anime lover all i hear is your better
Ya your as good an actor Think its time you closed ur browser
bitch ass stop eatin all that butter I think you got cancer
and i bet your as white as casper I stood up to him Im braver
Dont even say your browner so Im gonna win this like Jimmy Carter
Your a cheater an HHE dick rider So I'm openin a new chapter
This is me provin im more clever Ive never seen you in a cypher
What would you do if clinger closed proboards would u fuck a daughter?
Dissin me over bad grammar what a gangster lets expose your true gender
Your either albino or a ginger so gather ur homiesill leave em in agutter
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Re: diss lyrics

Postby 4D » Jun 1st, '08, 12:51

Hardly any of that rhymes. :confusion:
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Re: diss lyrics

Postby Kosovic » Jun 1st, '08, 13:39

Hardly any of that makes sense.
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Re: diss lyrics

Postby Boston » Jun 2nd, '08, 01:25

iight, im going to leave honest feed quickly,

the only positives i see out of this is at least you have somewhat of a clue, you at least try to get personal at least with punchlines, or whatever you want to call them. lol. you need to make more sense with your rhyming though, go in a direction, and speaking of rhyming..you actually need to do that, even start off with a basic rhyme scheme if you have too. good luck though
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Re: diss lyrics

Postby Kosovic » Jun 3rd, '08, 22:51

I will try to read again.

*fails*

Try harder.
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