Time To "Kill a Season/Killa Season" .. Dissin J Roc

[J Roc]

Fuck-Your-Structure Mother-Fucker, Now Yous Finna LOSE YAH LAST BEEF!
DUKE YOU RAP WEAK, Wont Shut Up Bout You SHOOT A HALF PEICE
So U Got No-Bound-Wins Cause dis "Pro-Nows-Shit/Pronouce-It" .. It Juss PROVES YOU CANT SPEAK!
Yah LINES WAS ALL HARD Back When You Was RHYMIN WIT BAR
But Now Your Shits Like "Rofl".. MINUS THA "R"(Ofl/Awful!)
"DickHead"! .. "COCK THAT?" Lol, An If We "Minus Your r"? .. Only Time "JOC" STRAPPED !!! (Think)
No Im NOT MAD, But That BaZZ Win?? We Know You Shoulda LOSS THAT!
Not-a-"Guitar" But If You "Offa-TR" .. Only Time "ROC BAND/BANNED"! lol
No,-Your-Hated An Over-Rated, So If You In Tha Alley Like TOM CATS?
An i SAW THAT?? Id PALM STRAPS, "Dot Yah Endin".. Make u "COM/CALM" .. *BLAST* ! (www DOT!)
GRAB THA CLIPPERS An Leave Yah "Body In Tha Dumpster" Cuz Iont HAVE TO LITTER !! (Ha!)
Heat?? Chyea Tha "Hot-Cooks", An If You Got-"Wood"? Youll CATCH THA SPLINTER !!
Dis Bitch, Tha GHAT AH LIFT HER! Leave Her "Red All Over" Like GRAPHIC PICTURES !!
So My Steal-Is-Heated, Im About To "Kill-A-Season" .. An Go BACK TO WINTER !!

Lightwork/

[DelinQuent]

you dissed yourself?

[J Roc]

Kids Slow If He Has To Ask^

[DelinQuent]

Well douche bag, the start of the title sounds like a diss to killa but then the end says "dissin j roc" and seeing as youre j roc it wouldnt make much sense for you to diss yourself. You seem to be the slow one for making a contradicting title. So maybe now you can be mature and give a proper response?

[J Roc]

Calm Down

"Killa Season" ... Check Tha Sig ... Tha Titles a Wordplay Onit ... Hows It Contrdictin Itself? .. Lol, Buh Im Tha Slow One ... I Juss Wrote This Off Cause I Needed a Topic ... Do U Really Think This Is Serios?? .. Lol Im Done -1

[Emadyville]

Whatever is going on, it was a good verse.

[DelinQuent]

Yeah shit was fire but I just didn't understand the title lol

[<VerbalTouch>]

this was good, but its kinda bad when you gotta explain a line or add shit like oh or hahaha at the end of it its kinda pointless dont you think? And I never got does-writing-like-this-make-your-lines-better?

[Kez]

you dissed yourself?

I was literally thinking those same words when i read it

Good though

[Tash8]

you dissed yourself?

I was literally thinking those same words when i read it

Good though

yea i guess we're all idiots, but that's what i thought at first.

[4D]

Some good multi's and wordplay, but all the punctuations, brackets, question marks and explanations totally killed the flow. A rhyme has to flow, even in text form, that should be the basis to build all the other juicy stuff on. Some good ideas and wordplay though.

Was also confused by the title, it doesn't make much sense and the rhyme doesn't really bring any clarity to it.

[Boston]

this shit i think alright, i find a lot of syllables in each bar, but if you flow right you can probaly do it, if you do decide to record that is.

its a pretty decent verse you could say, some of your punchlines are good but i think you can have better fillers at some points

ill leave more feed later

[Kosovic]

Its ok i guess.